Its a start
Okay, if this is your first Flash creation ever, then the quality is understandable. What I would recommend is to
a) think about the comedic timing a bit more in the planning stage...I honestly have no idea what just happened or what was supposed to be funny. This can be done with very little animation skills and will add a lot to your movie. See Marc M (RomeoJr)'s stuff as an example.
b) add detail. Basically what you've created is what the first draft of an animation should look like. Simplistic drawings just to map out the timing. Next step, make each and every drawing look better. Its time consuming but that's kind of the whole point.
Hopefully this helped, and good luck in your future animations.